NaPoWriMo 2024 +01 - NaPoWriMo 2025 -364
… between the islands …
Island of Aruba
Oranjestad capital
‘elegant’ Madurostraat apartment
pool swimming
West Deck
a friendly ‘hello!’
strangers no longer
Queen Beatrix
statuesque
blue horses’ sculpture
cruise liner parking
Cafe la Plaza
San Nicolas
magnificent murals
Lolita’s entrepreneurial spirit
oil refinery skeletal remains
reminder of island’s past
big red anchor
Baby Beach
catamaran launch
Palm Beach
Latin American architecture
Oroubu Plaza
California Lighthouse
aloe’s royal stamp
Arikok National Park
Alto Vista chapel
happy party buses
Natural Bridges
Casibari Rock Formations
Pos Chiquito house
Balashi Gold Mill ruin
Spanish Lagoon
National Archaeological Museum
National Library of Aruba
fofoti tree
Eagle Beach
natural sun lamp heat
Surfside Beach
setting sun treat
Caribbean happiness retreat
One Happy Island
transfers transatlantic
to Thrybergh Hall
Rotherham South Yorkshire
a family joined
one more happy celebration
one more happy day.
This is an extra for the end of NaPoWriMo 2024. A 'list poem' reflecting on thoughts, sights, experiences and feelings about our trip to Aruba and its 'transatlantic transfer' to England. I have enjoyed writing and sharing my poems and photographs of our Aruba experiences, Tom and Giandi getting married and celebrating in Aruba and Rotherham, England and meeting our extended, transatlantic family. I hope anyone reading my blog posts have enjoyed them too.
NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 30
... all good things ...
It's been another great NaPoWriMo this year with such inspiring prompts to get the creative juices flowing. I hope my focus on my experience of the Caribbean island of Aruba has been as interesting to readers as it has been for me, a lovely way to remember all that I experienced with my wife and other family members as we celebrated my nephew Tom getting married to Aruba-born Giandi.
This is the second year that I have been travelling when NaPoWriMo began: in 2023 we were in buenos Aires for the first time, so all month I remembered our experiences there. Where will I be next year? Probably at in in Coventry, England - if I am, then my poems will try to do justice to it as a city and, as a Yorkshireman, my adopted home of 43 years!
Thanks to NaPoWriMo again for your diligent curating of the prompts, the website and the resources. Thanks also to all my fellow poets for your excellent contributions - it amazes me the imaginations you have and skill in interpreting your ideas into poetry - not all read, sadly but to be returned to periodically during the year.
My next challenge is #The Sealey Challenge to read a poetry book each day during August.
I look forward to NaPoWriMo 2025.
Here is my effort for today: https://peterlongden.co.uk/f/napowrimo-2024-day-30-of-gods-and-dragons-%E2%80%A6
NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 30
… of gods and dragons …
How cavernous it looks and extends
high above in godly generous proportion,
extending like a splayed hand in every direction,
to be in this domain as Dushi Hende,
spiritual arrival point for carriage,
the presence bringing good fortune
with prosperity in the encounter
with the island spirit’s deportment
(it’s form blends with the Aruba winged-horse
the unique blue hue of Aether’s realm of sky
with Poseidon-esque tinged picture
of stamina, resilience and happiness of the island)
of message and messenger alike,
passage and passenger of flight
as they pass they clack—
the noise of thousands of insect wing beats
across the cracks of marble floors
coloured hard thorax-like shells
to classify their species
to be identified and retrieved when laid
from the belly of the silver dragons
the island attracts, at the end of flights
disgorging their charges
before settling back into their cavernous
beach-palm-sea lined homes--
welcomed home by Dushi Hende.
Today, the day when NaPoWriMo 2024 comes to an end, the challenge is to write a poem in which the speaker is identified with, or compared to, a character from myth or legend, as in Claire Scott’s poem “Scheherazade at the Doctor’s Office.”
NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 29
... incandescent ...
There was a time when ‘Swiftean words’ would indicate the lofty writings of a certain Jonathan
swiftly putting down, in scathing satire, the politics of the day in Gullivarian prose. Now it seems,
a taylor is swiftly getting in on the act with unknown motives: whether in self-effacing, Machiavellian altruism
is still to be fathomed in touring the hidden depths of a mind torturing poets and critics alike!
transported in delightful over spilling of strong emotion
and passion felt in a love of life, shining bright
as the incandescent light of an Aruban day
or setting before the night takes over; or expressing a humble understanding of its beauty
an unselfish outpouring of welcome offered
as ‘one happy island’ opens its shores
to the world? This island no island alone,
only too prepared to share its incandescence with travellers
seeking its Aruban beauty and joy, swiftly tailoring a bespoke offer,
like interpreting lyric poetry for the first time: the poets intent
not misunderstood, open-minded, open-hearted, open armed
not clandestine in greeting lovers of the islands incandescent glow.
Today’s prompt. If you’ve been paying attention to pop-music news over the past couple of weeks, you may know that Taylor Swift has released a new double album titled “The Tortured Poets Department.” In recognition of this occasion, Merriam-Webster put together a list of ten words from Taylor Swift songs. We hope you don’t find this too torturous yourself, but we’d like to challenge you to select one these words, and write a poem that uses the word as its title.
Here’s the list of the 10 ‘Swiftean’ words: clandestine, Machiavellian, incandescent, altruism, self-effacing, albatross, antithetical, mercurial, elegy, cardigan. I went a little further than the prompt asks and used several of the words in the course of the poem. I make no apologies for what might be seen as a tenuous segue to more of another ode to Aruba
NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 28
… transatlantic family …
It was King’s Day, it was a birthday, a joining of hearts day
three countries celebrate and welcome this happy union
across an ocean, this transatlantic family is formed
My nephew Tom married Giandi in Baltimore, were blessed in Aruba, where Giandi was born, and celebrated, yesterday in Rotherham, England where Tom was born. Yesterday, was the first time the whole of this new ‘transatlantic’ family came together.
The prompt for the day is to try writing a sijo. This is a traditional Korean verse form. A sijo has three lines of 14-16 syllables. The first line introduces the poem’s theme, the second discusses it, and the third line, which is divided into two sentences or clauses, ends the poem – usually with some kind of twist or surprise.
NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 27
… sonnet for a fallen friend …
Did friendship cause a national disaster?
Everybody wants/every family has a photograph
standing on Aruba’s Natural Bridge:
ancient remnant sea cave in Arikok—
coral construction collapse-creation
high-spot family photogenic place
low-point, not slow-point, ‘consolation’ bridge
as described by driver for island tour;
put up with the dust from lines of UTVs
making-believe they’re ‘solo’ explorers on a moon-scape
buzzing around like so many mosquito mechanica;
friendship still forms for this still spectacular
north shore, surf-pounding chaotic volcanic rock of age,
‘Baby Bridge’ phenomena— left behind by Katrina’s stormy passage.
On our island tour our driver, when talking about the fate of Aruba’s Natural Bridge, speculated that it’s collapse was due to too many people gathering on its arch to have ‘friendly’ photographs taken to celebrate birthdays, weddings, engagements, even that some would drive onto the bridge for the purpose. It seems the bridge collapsed on 2 September 2005 due to the damage caused by Hurricane Katrina.
Today the prompt challenge is to write an “American sonnet.” What’s that? Well, it’s like a regular sonnet but . . . fewer rules? Like a traditional Spencerian or Shakespearean sonnet, an American sonnet is shortish (generally 14 lines, but not necessarily!), discursive, and tends to end with a bang, but there’s no need to have a rhyme scheme or even a specific meter.I have ended mine though, with the conventional rhyming couplet.
With only 4 More NaPoWriMo 2024 days to go, the sun is beginning to set over West Deck, Oranjestad, Aruba as well as over this years poetry writing month!
NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 26
… turtles won’t hurtle …
Perhaps, with assurance, I can ruin
a good assonance poem
with a line like ‘scuba in Aruba’,
but that is what is doing where
wrecks of old survive
in coral seas, the dive
keeping the teaming
fish alive in moving waves
where it’s certain that turtles
won’t hurtle to the beaches
at their most fertile as they
complete a circle of life:
back to their birth beach—
a final hurdle in survival
of the species in their vernal
prime for laying and it is
their babies that hurtle
in instinct for survival in
revival of the species
across the spacious oceans,
and specifically this glorious Caribbean Sea!
Today’s challenging prompt is to write a poem that involves alliteration, consonance, and assonance. Alliteration is the repetition of a particular consonant sound at the beginning of multiple words. Consonance is the repetition of consonant sounds elsewhere in multiple words, and assonance is the repetition of vowel sounds. Traci Brimhall’s poem “A Group of Moths” provides a great example of these poetic devices at work, with each line playing with different sounds that seem to move the poem along on a sonorous wave.
The poem doesn’t have to be as complex as all that, though. Just pick a consonant or two and a vowel and dive right into the wonderful world (hey, there’s some alliteration/consonance/assonance right there) of sound.
NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 25
… being Aruba …
Being that island is my idea of perfect happiness,
not being that island is the greater fear,
of course, Betico, the island’s independence engineer, is most admired,
the beach, the sea and sunshine are the extravangances to enjoy
when in that Aruba state of mind!
On what occasion do i lie?
When the beach is reached, truly,
there to contemplate what’s to dislake about the island:
dislike? Despise?
Other words are overused:
‘one’ is first, ‘happy’ the second, and finally, ‘island’
of the greatest love, no need to ask!
Where is the greatest love, no need to ask?
Where and when in the world is thought the happiest? Why, here on Aruba and now!
So many abilities to choose from, the one to shout out is humility!
What’s to change in such an idyll,
would Da Vinci want to change the Mona Lisa—
to change anything would ruin the whole effect;
celebrate the greatest achievement,
that of being Aruba,
being the motto on the signs
(even on car licence plates!)
that everyone lives up to
with each ‘good morning’ said to a stranger,
welcome to “One Happy Island”!
This portrait of Alice van Romondt is my chosen image for this poem as it represents all that is good about the island, One admirer describes “Alice” as a larger than life Aruban matriarch of the arts and artists. A librarian by trade, Alice's career has been motivated by the desire to serve her community and that she has, with great dignity and influence.
Today's challenge is to write a poem based on the “Proust Questionnaire,” a set of questions drawn from Victorian-era parlor games, and adapted by modern interviewers. You could choose to answer the whole questionnaire, and then write a poem based on your answers, answer just a few, or just write a poem that’s based on the questions. You could even write a poem in the form of an entirely new Proust Questionnaire.I used some of the questionnaire which can be found at: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Proust_Questionnaire
NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 24
… sea turtles and land turtles …
Spontaneity is lost in the act of browsing,
sometimes the ‘not knowing’ adds to the frisson
of the occasion; like watching turtles swimming
where they are supposed to, the vastness not lessened
where a leatherback is small flotsam on the tide—
will one appear to be seen? There's the surprise!
Yet it happens for watchers at Tres Trapi beach
though, being turtles, they persevere in swimming where they like,
as locals know, to their delight, no beach is off-limits:
not Roger’s nor Baby nor Druif Beaches
access an open door to the white sand on land and by sea;
one land-locked by Eagle Beach faces the ocean
heavy bronze afloat from Bogata shows pride
of the island for its frequent nesting visitors
at the gateway to High Hotel’s Strip
where the wealthy nest with their waiter service
to swimming pools spending their time
and money there during their infrequent visits,
juxtaposing the unspoiled wildness of the island
with the less-welcome high-rise concrete condition.
Today’s challenge is to write a poem that begins with a line from another poem (not necessarily the first one) but then goes elsewhere with it. The idea is for the original to furnish the backdrop for your work, but without influencing you so much that you feel as if you are just rewriting the original!
I’ve chosen the line: “they persevere in swimming where they like” from the poem ‘Sea Unicorns and Land Unicorns” by Marianne Moore. Here it is with a couple of other lines:
they persevere in swimming where they like,
finding the place where lions live in herds,
strewn on the beach like stones with lesser stones—
NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 23
… Super-Aloe …
I am Aruba’s superhero: Royal Aloe!
don’t think me shallow when I boast
of my super-healing powers:
when I transform into Aloe-Vera,
that’s when I really become Aloe-Hero!
I am a super-soother on the skin,
especially, after it’s been under the Aruban sun,
I maybe my own kryptonite—
in one of my alter egos,
I am a genius with the digestive system!
(I rush in without dread,
where others fear to tread,
arch enemy: Laxative of crime,
I guarantee a clear out every time!)
Feet on the ground, I know my roots,
no interplanetary travel needed
for my super-strength: just golden sunshine
and watch me grow though no cape needed
for this super-regenerative super-inanimate succulent
with super-sensitive healing that’s naturally sublime!
Today, the challenge is to write a poem about, or involving, a superhero.
I have invented my own superhero, so I’m not sure if this is strictly on point (whether it should have been about an existing hero from the DC or Marvel universes; but in the spirit of all poems Aruba, aloe is the islands superhero!
NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 22
… chapel versus cactus …
“We were here first!” said the cactus to the chapel,
“I think you could call us indigenous!”
The chapel, remained aloof,
it’s steeple standing proud,
not wanting to demean itself
the base level of debate out loud.
“We have exotic names like dagger,
and Peruvian apple and melon;
not to mention, the pear,
which is why I’m so prickly!”
“Prickly pear!” chortled the chapel,
“have you ever heard the like!”
“I told you not to mention it!”
said the prickly pear,
to the chapel’s obvious delight.
“Well, I was designed and built here,”
the chapel finally found its voice,
“perhaps not the best place,
certainly not my first choice;
but it has a certain vista,
it has the required height,
if it wasn’t for you cactus,
the sea would be well within our sight!”
“You’ve only been here fifty years,
we’ve grown here since the beginning,
now like your visitors, it’s time
for you to leave! You bring
all these buses here, along
the dust trail they weave, not covering
us with glory, that’s another story to tell,
they don’t stay longer than a photograph,
I’m afraid your worship has sailed!
You haven’t a prayer to be winning
against the forest we are growing,
in other words, in contrast
to our Royal cousin, Aloe,
your lofty presence here has failed!”
“I’ll forgive you your encroachment,
our striking yellow walls are stand out
the best feature out here,
in contrast to your dull, dusty green,
that’s why so many visitors have been;
our popularity has nothing to fear
from an apple, a dagger, a melon,
you prickly pears don’t make us nervous,
can’t we just coexist in harmony
in this happy place?” If the cactus
could have nodded, it would,
“some peaceful coexistence,
is just what this world needs!”
Today’s prompt comes from the poet and fiction writer Todd Dillard, who provided the idea to write a poem in which two things have a fight. Two very unlikely things, if you can manage it. Like, maybe a comb and a spatula.
NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 21
… the female of the species are Lagadishi while the males are Blóbló …
As sure as the flag is blue
it’s a sure thing to see
its azure sky
mirrored in its azure sea
once swum by its horses
(not sea horses though technically,
for a few minutes, I’m sure …)
now blue horses grazing
Commemorating, lazily near its city shore
and Aruba is not ‘blue’
(though its flag is)
it’s sure of itself
this ‘One Happy Isle’
San Nicolas muralists too
place their faith in the colour blue
the lizard with a wall to climb
the turtle swimming to survive;
a clear blue paradise
a clear sure promise
its assertive premise
its pleasure paradigm
the startlingly blue sea
seen even from thousands
of feet above
blue flagged beaches
to hearts the island reaches
in Papiamento ‘blou’
or ‘blauw’ of Dutch Antilles
in any language true
the island’s happiest with blue
Baby Beach where shallows are light blue
blou claro in Papiamento
blou skur as day becomes night
where blue whiptail lizard scurries
endemic to the island
the female of the species
are Lagadishi while the males
are Blóbló or blue-blue
so blue they named it twice
blue painted cruise liners bedecked
hotels afloat anchored
in ‘Horses Bay’ for all-inclusive
luxury shops— no blue-cross
before, sadly, whisked away
Today, the is challenge to write a poem that repeats or focuses on a single colour.
NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 20
… Paarden Baai …
or ... where are the Blue Horses?
Now there’s Rosalinda, Saturnina,
Escapia and Sinforosa; find Eufrosina,
Ambrosio, Bonifacia and Celestina
they’re scattered around the city
but to find them here’s a clue:
they’re not the usual horsy colours,
they swam the clearest sea
so they’re all coloured blue;
they’re the Blue Horses of Aruba,
marking the way the horses came to stay,
at the time of the island's first horse trade
there was no jetty to unload them in place.
The bravest of the horses would go first,
plunging into the Caribbean waves,
followed by the rest, they’d swim ashore,
not the most expected way for horses to behave!
But so important to Aruba was this trade,
this sculpture installation is there to commemorate
how Aruban artist Osaira Muyale represents
"Strength, Nobility, Beauty, Freedom and Grace"
of the horses and the island's heritage.
Paarden Baai translates to “Horses Bay”, the name still in use for the bay in front of the capital city of Oranjestad, near the cruise terminal.
The prompt for the day is to write a poem that recounts a historical event.
NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 19
… stranger things …
Strange things happen in time
as the silver bird makes its mile-high climb
slip back hours: will that make us late?
last to arrive or not find the place our fate?
Strange things happen at the Balashi Gold Mills
near the ancient place of Spanish Lagoon
where the indigenous people of the island
once defended their place against collectors of gold and doubloons
the haunting location now a ruin set in time
reclaimed by nature where goats roam the quiet
even bird call seems subdued
only the burrowing owl, the shoco, disturbs the peace
We find a place which we think might be right:
a beautiful location, a desert-deserted scape
cacti growing to fantastic heights
wedding planners confirm our hunt has been precise
strange thing that their timing should coincide
perhaps the spirit of the place is aligned
to help the hunt not haunt us
and to reassure us in our find
the legendary woman in white
made her appearance the following day
meeting her loved one yet not clandestine
friends and family there to share the time
steel pans call the congregation to gather
the aisle stone-clad steps climbing high
gypsophila-marked arch under which rings exchanged
under the clear, Aruban blue sky
the haunting of time is behind
the hunt led to a carnival night
the spirit of the island passes on its happiness
lives together not so strange a thing.
Today’s prompt comes from Moist Poetry Journal, which posted this prompt by K-Ming Chang a while back:
What are you haunted by, or what haunts you? Write a poem responding to this question. Then change the word haunt to hunt.
NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 18
... Gulliver's later travels ...
He is the traveller I would be,
already lived a long life
near 300 years and by no means old as the story of his travels
are told and retold as he gains fame
landing on islands to dominate yet be diminished
yet on one island I would be Gulliver-
the giant Gulliver--
forever immuralised in San Nicolas
on the public library wall
surrounded by the books I love
pressing in on me to read displaying
the key to knowledge acquired from so doing
offering this to anyone who cares to take it up
to open their own passage to happiness
unaware that a hundred years of solitude
might need to be endured
safe from the offense
to Lilliput or Brobdingnag
safe harbour bagged alongside luxury
lined up to display ‘One Happy Island’.
tattooed upon a forearm
safe to read the books pressing in on me.
Today’s challenge is to write a poem in which the speaker expresses the desire to be someone or something else, and explains why.
NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 17
... Eight Line Poem ... or ... ode to lines of aloe ...
No lack of cactus in the fields on show
for the purveyors of the royal gel: aloe
the nobel plant grows to its own conclusion
harvest made of its component parts
its factory shop open near Oranjestad
the aloe gets its royal approval
a place on the island’s coat of arms
and it’s the sun that makes the plant the star!
Today’s prompt is to write a poem that is inspired by a piece of music, and that shares its title with that piece of music. I’ve chosen Eight Line Poem by David Bowie.
Here is the great David Bowie with Eight Line Poem. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HcWIoihuatE
NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 16
… California high …
It’s dominant in its prominence
positioned for the effect
of light that was to shine
out across the night in lazy circles
to protect mariners approaches
from east or west
cool concrete looms in
precipitous window-pocked climb
from doorway base in symmetrical rise
to delight yet white glare
requires shaded the eye to see
out towards the Caribbean breakers
where the namesake wreck lies
its wooden hull amidst the coral
of this island paradise
‘hotel’ to a colourful natural array
of aquatic residents and visitors
out of their all-inclusive depths
the heat clings outside
from an arid moonscape
this concrete finger points
a cooler route to climb
circling inside on 98 tired feet
counting the steps from beginning
to end at the netted balcony
feeling the cooling buffeting beastly
easterly wrapping itself around
the round and any figures to have
braved the climb to look down
upon Arashi beach and beyond
to ‘high hotels’ signed at Palm Beach
resorting to drawing in vacationers wealth
with stealth to spoil more the prospect
from California Lighthouse
clinging renewed to its island prominence
a view of the world born out of disaster
Today’s prompt is from NaPoWriMo’s 2016 archives, the challenge to write a poem in which an object or place is closely described and then ended with a much more abstract line that doesn’t seemingly have anything to do with that object or place, but which, of course, really does. The “surprise” ending to this James Wright poem is a good illustration of the effect hoped to be achieved. An abstract, philosophical kind of statement closing out a poem that is otherwise intensely focused on physical, sensory details.
NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 15
... making its marque ...
In international philately terms,
Aruba is probably ‘small fry’,
only postage stamp-sized
in its world profile,
geographical position
in the ABC isles—
the isles first stamps commemorate
its independence as a state
as late as 1986— before that
a Dutch colony exists,
and what else from its stempel creators flow
what to impress
but it’s lighthouse and sunset glow
or its flora and fauna
it’s royal renowned aloe;
it’s Papiamento lexicon:
danki for thanks and bon bini
the welcome to one happy island
it’s beauty stamped indelibly on memories.
Today, we’re encouraged to take a look at @StampsBot, or the online “International Philately” and become inspired by the wide, wonderful, and sometimes wacky world of postage stamps.
NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 14
… what if there was an island …
What if there was a desert island that had ten hours of sunshine everyday, would that be a place to stay.
What if the first inhabitants, the Caquetios Indians from the Arawak tribe, came forward in time, what would they think of it: the preservation of the National park.
What if that were to become theirs again, making Casibari their home again.
What if they found the High Hotels of Palm Beach, would they be impressed by the architectural presence, the casino, resorting to capitalism beyond the capital.
What if no more condominiums were built around the southern beaches of Rogers and Baby.
What if it remained as unspoilt as if the Arawak had always been there.
What if Spanish and Dutch explorers hadn’t discovered and occupied the island.
What if Savaneta was still its capital, still a tiny village with its 150 year old mud hut still preserved in perpetuity.
What if it was surrounded by clear seas on which to sail, in which to swim, about which to write.
What if it is this sea from which turtles emerge to lay their eggs in white sands, from which the new born scurry on rushing flippers back to the sea in a journey of survival.
What if it called itself one happy island and it happened to be true?
The prompt today is to write a poem of at least ten lines in which each line begins with the same word (e.g., “Because,” “Forget,” “Not,” “If”). This technique of beginning multiple lines with the same word or phrase is called anaphora, and has long been used to give poems a driving rhythm and/or a sense of puzzlebox mystery.
NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 13
… the turtle decided not to show …
the turtle decided not to show
preferring its world of silence
where it’s resilience can prevail
as far away as possible
from a party boat under sail!
the sea cat moved silently
until the dj began to play
the sail run up the mast
with some distance still to go
the turtle decided not to show!
anchored to a makeshift bouy
a calm dwelling above an Aruban reef
snorkelling among its inhabitants
who can blame the turtle not to show!
diving and returning to exhale
salty water in the mouth
the first sortie amongst the crowds
at the sight of the monsters take flight
no wonder the turtle didn’t show!
the sea cat reached across snow-white Palm Beach
refreshed by fruity tastes enroute
watching for the slow moving silhouette
until darkness endured its privacy
some other time for the turtle to decide to show!
The prompt for the day asks you to play with rhyme. Start by creating a “word bank” of ten simple words. They should only have one or two syllables apiece. Five should correspond to each of the five senses (i.e., one word that is a thing you can see, one word that is a type of sound, one word that is a thing you can taste, etc). Three more should be concrete nouns of whatever character you choose (i.e., “bridge,” “sun,” “airplane,” “cat”), and the last two should be verbs. Now, come up with rhymes for each of your ten words. (If you’re having trouble coming up with rhymes, the wonderful Rhymezone is at your service). Use your expanded word-bank, with rhymes, as the seeds for your poem. Your effort doesn’t actually have to rhyme in the sense of having each line end with a rhymed word, but try to use as much soundplay in your poem as possible.
Word bank: silence resilience, reach beach, salty sortie, sight take flight, fruit enroute, snorkelling dwelling, sailing exhale, sea cat mast, party darkness
NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 11
… Tito has a street art Phoenix …
No one has ideas like Tito Bolivar:
his strength hewn from Casibari itself,
brought from the streets of Bogotá
back to his home town San Nicolas
bringing back sunrise to the city
on shoulders wider than Aruba
taller than Gulliver as he walks between
Columbia and his island home
trailing behind him the ships of delight
to ignite the passion of a new nation;
his phoenix rises from a refinery’s ashes
by the brushes and spray cans
of great muralists like Armando Goedgedrag
another of Aruba’s children
brought on phoenix’ wings
the world over who fill walls with images
of striking beasts and larger than life
characters to match that of Tito and Diana—
co-conspirator in the art— strong woman
behind the great and good— mother
of all— as their huge hands
that match their ideas and ideals
support and celebrate birth in creativity
and rebirth in limitless imagination:
a new world order for this One Happy Isle.
Today, the challenge is to write a poem that plays with the idea of a “tall tale.” American tall tales feature larger-than-life characters like Paul Bunyan (who is literally larger than life): a modern poetic take on the tall tale is Jennifer L. Knox’s hilarious poem, “Burt Reynolds FAQ.” The poem can revolve around a mythical character, one made up entirely, or add fantastical elements into a real person’s biography.
NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 11
… one happy island …
The Aruban way is to be happiest making sure others are happy about Aruba being the one happy island it is!
The prompt for the day honors the “ones” in the number 11. The challenge is to write either a monostich, which is a one-line poem, or a poem made up of one-liner style jokes/sentiments. A mono stitch is a one line stanza poem; monostich poems will use the juxtaposition of a title with the one-liner to create a poem in the space between.
NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 10
… ceremonial nod …
“When the clergyman puts the questions to them, each should consult their relations by a respectful sign of the head, before answering the decisive ‘yes’.”
From ‘The Wedding Ceremony, Ladies and Gentlemen’s Pocket Companion’, 1800
… ceremonial nod …
Perhaps it was the stunning views
across Aruba from the gold mill ruins,
perhaps it was the excitement of the day;
yes, he had more words than one or two,
maybe by the heat of the sun he missed his cue,
or wanted to skip to the most important words to say
family and friends were gathered at the mill,
the air was cooled by the wind and never still,
he didn’t need the congregation’s nod to approve,
the bride in stunning dress climbed on father’s arm
more beauty to add to Arikok’s arid charm,
patiently he waited to declare a love that’s true,
Balashi may have produced the gold for many rings
‘One Happy Island’ welcomed as steel pans sing
perhaps that’s why he was so quick to say his ‘I do’?
the faux pas for a moment was something to amuse
officiating, the brides brother was not confused,
he had plenty more to ask before the groom
could say again, in the correct place: “I do!”
Today’s prompt! Ezra Pound famously said that “poetry is news that stays news.” While we don’t know about that, the news can have a certain poetry to it. Today, we’d like to challenge you to write a poem based on one of the curious headlines, cartoons, and other journalistic tidbits featured at Yesterday’s Print, where old news stays amusing, curious, and sometimes downright confusing.
NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 9
… ode to the ice cube …
It’s so humble
in its clarity
shifting forms
by physics frozen
in time— sublime
as it fights the heat
ten percent surfacing
in Coke zero
or Mojito, it is a tiny berg
its purpose short-lived
but will always suffice
produced by the bucketful
kept refrigerator-full
for One Happy Island
cocktail hour;
it’s so humble
this diamond cube
of soothing pleasure
yet enormous as it breaks
the global warming
it indicates: as big as Aruba
floating by in titanic mass
yet simplicity in delight
celebrate lowly geometrics
in a cube of ice.
Today's prompt is inspired by Pablo Neruda, the Chilean-born poet and Nobel Prize Winner who, in addition to his most famous English-language collections Twenty Love Poems and a Song of Despair, he also wrote more than two hundred odes, many in appreciation for very common or mundane things, for example, “Ode to the Dictionary” at the bottom of this page, “Ode to My Socks” here, and “Ode to a Large Tuna in the Market” here.
Today, the challenge is to write an ode celebrating an everyday object.
I've chosen one based on a photograph I took on my last day in Aruba: there was an ice box looking incongruous at the back of a bar, containing a lot of these.
NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 8
… the party bus and the iguana …
an iguana found itself asleep on a bus roof—
an accident of circumstance;
just there to warm itself
laying still as stone in the hot sunlight
it found the bus was an Arubian Party Bus
it grew to an enormous size,
with steel pans playing
and danced there through the night!
The prompt for day 8 takes its inspiration from Laura Foley’s poem “Year End” and the challenge is to write a poem that centers around an encounter or relationship between two people (or things) that shouldn’t really have ever met – whether due to time, space, age, the differences in their nature, or for any other reason.
NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 7
… wish you were here …
‘Greetings from Aruba’,
it says on the picture:
the Fofoti tree on Eagle Beach,
it’s addressed to my brother
who, sadly, couldn’t make the trip,
his sense of humour still a feature:
“Weather here, wish you were lovely,”
it begins, “home tomorrow,
so back before this will reach you!
“Aruba is One Happy Island!
There was dancing all night
that’s like standard operating procedure!
“Ceremony at the Gold Mill Ruins
the scenery there is stunning
Spanish Lagoon in easy reach
“Fabulous week under Caribbean sun
with water a clear window to the sea:
‘paradise’ is not just a figure of speech!”Today’s challenge is to write a poem titled “Wish You Were Here” that takes its inspiration from the idea of a postcard. Consistent with the abbreviated format of a postcard, your poem should be short, and should play with the idea of travel, distance, or sightseeing.
NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 6
… at the end of the day …
This is what a friend of mine always says:
pointing to themself, their chest,
in that wise, inscrutable way,
behind wire rimmed spectacles
that made them of their own professoriate;
slowly deliberately delivering each word
as if to give each syllable equal weight,
“at the end of the day,”
with a pause for poignancy,
a ‘hang-on-every-word’ delay,
thinking their wisdom will be worth
every ‘held-breath’ moment to wait,
every second not being wasted
but an investment to betterment anticipated,
then blank faced delivery as if of a punchline:
“there’s night!”
Which has its own poignancy for yesterday,
off the coast of Aruba’s Palm Beach
set sail to dive amongst shoals
at a coral reef we reached,
as the evening moved on what a sight,
we found, at the end of the day …
Today’s challenge is to write a poem rooted in “weird wisdom,” something objectively odd that someone told you once, and that has stuck with you ever since. For an example, check out Naomi Shihab Nye’s poem “Making a Fist.”
NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 5
The Happiness of the Arubian, the Fofoti tree and the aloe
My happiness stems
said the Arubian
from the warmth of the sun
that is plentiful
and that through me,
I can pass on to others
on my One Happy Island.
My happiness stems
said the Fofoti tree
from my unique standing
on this One Happy Island
resilient, as Aruba, to the winds
stout roots in the sand
the eagle eye to see and guide.
My happiness stems
said the aloe cactus
from what I offer in my leaves
by royal assent I share
my, almost magical, properties to heal
in the acemannan I yield:
ancient fruit of this One Happy Island.
Note: Acemannan is the gel found in the leaves of the aloe, used in skin lotions and other cosmetics.
Today we start by reading Alicia Ostriker’s poem, “The Blessing of the Old Woman, the Tulip, and the Dog, then trying to write a poem about how a pair or trio very different things would perceive of a blessing or, alternatively, how these very different things would think of something else (luck, grief, happiness, etc). I chose happiness as I’m on the One Happy Island of Aruba.
NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 4
… definitely Queer Fish …
Have you ever noticed how fish talk to you when you approach?
I’ve seen it with pollack, parrot fish and roach,
I was snorkelling off Baby Beach the other day
and this jet black angel fish was trying to shoo me away!
“Get your hand away from my door,” it said,
“I’ve just laid my eggs, now I’m going off to bed!
“I can’t be havin’ a great monstrous thing like you disturb the peace!
I think you should be going now, let your sea bed disturbing cease!”
This is where the Yorkshire saying comes from: ‘nowt so queer as fish’!
Hear it in the fish market or the chippy over today’s exotic dish:
Deep fried turbot in a panko crumb, browned and perfectly done;
or the sergeant with its stripes ordering around the hermit in its bun;
or rainbow trout that sets itself apart, gender neutral in its multi-coloured way
multi-cultural, multi-disciplined and definitely perfect whichever the day!
The prompt for today is the challenge to write a poem which takes its title or some language/ideas from The Strangest Things in the World, A Book About Extraordinary Manifestations of Nature by THOMAS R. HENRY. First published in 1958, the book gives shortish descriptions of odd natural phenomena, and is notable for both its author’s turn of phrase and intermittently dubious facts. Perhaps you will be inspired by the “The Self-Perpetuating Sponge” or “The World’s Biggest Sneeze.” Or maybe the quirky descriptions of luminous plants, monstrous bears, or the language of ravens will give you inspiration:
Queer Fish, But Definitely
There are more than 40,000 kinds of fish in the world. Their habitats range from the profoundest depths of the seas to cold lakes and brooks on mountain timberlines. They show a bewildering diversity in their ways of life.
NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 3
… the octopus has tentacles …
The octopus has tentacles that insinuate themselves into places that anchor it as an idea in the world, only attractive to those who find the cephalopod, its head on its foot, so. This octopus has creativity in mind, reaching into that of Tito who strategises a more healthy life from the dereliction of one of the world’s biggest oil refineries at San Nicolas on the ‘One Happy Island’ of Aruba, its own Caribbean footprint a tiny part of the ‘ABC Antilles’ yet becoming a colossus in the world of art, where artists from all corners of the globe (in itself a remarkable feat of geometric illusion) bringing their craft and characters and monsters and leaving behind their stamp on creation. Tito’s dream brings forth the mighty and dangerous lionfish of which there is no known predator; alongside the turtle making its journey for survival; while Gulliver, tattooed arm emblazoned with ‘One Happy Island’ holds the key to wisdom while being crushed by the weight of knowledge; the king and queen are exposed in skeletal glory while lizards scuttle up walls to the dwindling sounds of endangered parrots, tails fading into extinction. Everywhere Tito turns now he sees the tentacles of his ideals emerging from walls like some exotic growth of many colours being extruded from the One Happy Island’s fabric.
Prompt for today is the challenge to write a surreal prose poem.
We visited San Nicolas on the island of Aruba yesterday which is inspiration for my poem today. An amazzing, surreal place…
NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 2
… a watery love …
You are the love of a lifetime,
born from within you as you broke
your icy embrace forced my first crying breath
to give relief and find mother love;
I first remember our childhood introduction:
being dropped into the pool on Sheffield Road
to emerge spluttering but happy
that you buoyed me to your surface
I love you for helping raise our sons
both seemingly of Kingsleyan descent
little ducklings trained to survive and compete
and love you almost as much as I!
I love you for your warmth
the shelter you give on a cold night
the support to the canoe or boat
I steered through life to where, now,
I’m swimming under Aruban sunshine,
embraced by Faro de Palm sea
showing clearly your depth and essence
a lifetime love to sustain my love of life.
Aruba Adventure for
NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 1
… Road Atlas …
Such a powerful title:
like it could hold the world
on its strong spine
telling tales of journeys
in the minutest details;
adventures in strange lands
observed as if I was there!
Illustrated to scale
in full colour, the place names
are characters in their own right:
yesterday London today Oranjestad,
drawn out with mystery and romance
to b explored in full
as an adventure unfolds;
unread and missed these years
when TomTom and GoogleMaps
have taken away the tactile
pleasure of the Road Atlas:
of planning the exploration of life
with its plot twists and turns
with so many dead ends
it’s as good as a murder mystery!
Today’s prompt: write – without consulting the book – a poem that recounts the plot, or some portion of the plot, of a novel that you remember having liked but that you haven’t read in a long time. I’ve taken a ‘novel’ approach, i.e. Not quite on brief … but hey!
Teaser
We’re actually in Aruba! For the first week at least! Sea, sun, sand, snorkelling and the wedding of my nephew Tom and Giandi to be blessed. Here’s an early bird poem too based on the selection of the word, appropriately, ‘ocean’, since we crossed one today.
An Ocean
An ocean away,
takes flight to be
an ocean away,
across the pond
abscond on silvered wings
just as albatross crosses oceans
or as ancient mariner adrift
bemoaning the surrounding waters
an ocean near the drop
to sink as wreckage into salt hydration
before land is reclaimed
and saved as the famous five
Atlantic, Pacific, Indian, Southern and Arctic
wrap their seven-tenths around
continental divides sharing wealth
with Caribbean and other seas
in wild protection freed
to avert environmental disaster
compelled to unwrap the plastic
from an affected ocean world
finding nature’s freedom
not preserved in a sea life world
but on an ocean paradise
to find natural treasures
where ‘X’ not ‘ex’ always marks the spot.
Photograph by the poet.
It’s here! One of my favourite times of the year - NaPoWriMo 2024 - 30 poems in 30 days. Actually, it begins tomorrow but here’s an early treat for the day before to whet the appetite,